Love calls
Near the ocean’s surf
Under forest’s dense shade
Atop a mountain in the breeze
Love smiles
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Enjoyable reads indeed! You tempt me toward the grounds of formal verse with your tidy tanka and cool haiku.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, that Google knows the word 'haiku' but underlines 'tanka' in red. Google is a bumpkin! (Praise google, that it may nourish and defend my copyrights). Oh, and look - it dislikes seeing itself in lower case. You'll get over it, googy old chum. (I'm so getting hit by internet lightning for my disrespect any second now)
Thanks for sharing your work, Mary. Another pleasant thing for my Reader thingy to deliver - isn't the future great? Talk to you later -
PG